Perspective

My book(The Season Of Life) is written from the perspective of the main character. His name is Jeffrey Marx, he is kind of hanging in the back of Gilman High School's football program, watching and listening to how life goes on. There are not very many main characters in this book, but it could be very different in the Perspective of Joe. Joe is a former Colts player, and the head of the Gilman football program. He has a very different style of coaching than most coaches, and if this book was written from his perspective it would have been possible to dive a lot farther into his style of coaching, and why he coaches in this particular way. It also might have talked more about his history as a Football player, and how he came to meet Jeffrey in the first place.